Fate plays a game without a score
bringing me back where I grew
Musing at the apron of loneliness
covering me, hovering over me
in a room once painted with memoirs
opening a window down memory lanes
joints cricking , reminiscence aching
dusting those sun-kissed
work hardened hands
brows wiggling against blinding
rays of my county’s sun.
I see weeds sprouting despondently
worming a dried up backyard
where we rushed over fences
to catch the first carol every Christmas
where the castles in sandboxes
were the only known sands of time
when edgy rainy dull Sundays
stranded us in our rooms
waiting with noses against this window
chin upon clenched hands
sniffing running noses
spirits only soaring higher by the minute.
I changed, aged, matured
but this place remains unaffected
I’ve grown wings, wrinkles
challenged, failed, bruised with time
stabilized which was a gamble then
when daring an enemy-clad sibling
was the only mission in tow
failure was getting a B in art
while that neighbor’s acing it
bruising meant a wounded knee
or a scraped elbow over sunset
times do flicker and people do differ
you realize smiling a little
that was then & this is now…
~ET/MD, 2010
37 comments:
How beautifully poignant.
This line:
>>> Musing at the apron of loneliness
It is an experience I know, intimately.
Thank you for writing and sharing today.
The Groan, my response to this week's magpie.
Wonderfully atmospheric, discriptive and beautifully written, I really liked this, very good Magpie :o)
Perspective always changes over time... :)
Outstanding imagery!
Your poetry is inspiring.
Thank You!
love the level you went to with this. Great read.
That was lovely but I have to admit that the first line "Fate plays a game without a score" is so true and my favorite.
wonderful imagery...i can so relate to the older we get and place staying the same...i feel that was about my parents house...nice magpie
And we do just keep on keepin' on. Mostly. Nice work, indeed!
Strange how different "then" looks now. Very nice!
So descriptive, poignant take on this the memories of days of old as opposed to time now.
Well done.
I loved the images this conjured for me. Inspired writing.
@Tracy(Petty Witter) Thank you so much :)
@Julie Jordan I am so glad you could relate, Thank you so much for dropping by :)
@Deborah Oh Thank you so much :)
@Jinksy That's so true...
@Giovanni Thank you for your kind compliment :)
@Michael :) Thank You
@Kristen I agree.I sometimes believe in it...
@Brian Thank you...Everytime I had head back home, I feel that...
@Tumblewords True that.Thank you :)
@Ana :)Yes,we just change so much.Thank you :)
@Reflections Thank you,I'm glad you liked it...
@Dave Thank you :)
very beautiful tale...
u have got the talent.
lovely writing. Beautifully captured memories. It swept me along.
@Jingle :)Thank you so much...
@Little hat Thank you..:)
A bittersweet pilgrimage.
@Jason :)Yes.Sometimes we stop and think about these things...
Brilliant piece. Apron of loneliness struck a strong chord with me.
@Willow Thank you so much. That was an excellent prompt n I was more than happy to read write-ups from other writers.
Thank You!:)
Musing at Apron's Loneliness.. that stunning imagery there! LOVED IT!
my magpie is ~here~
wow..did this ever bring back memories
wonderul and poignant
@Leo :D Thank you so much for dropping by such a lovely encouragment...
@Rene :) Thanks a lot...
Hi,
This is my first visit to your blog and I enjoyed reading your poem. Wonderfully described...never once going over the line! Very well expressed!
Hey Nikita,
Thank you so much for dropping by and for that lovely comment.:)
"Apron of lonliness" - lovely line.
@Anil Thank you :)
There was some lovely images in this. Well done.
@Akasha Many Thanks :)
Bitter sweet really. Like Shelly would say, our sweetest songs are those that tell of saddest thoughts!
@Mona So true...So true :)
knock knock! long time no hear!
@ ~G m back again :)
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