Saturday, July 17, 2010

"The Poetry Bus Challenge!", by Dominic

Okay! So I m trying my hands on Dominic's assignment n hopping on the poetry bus for the first time...This was a bit difficult...n i suppose m the last one to hop on...

But just about the background..I would suggest don't try this at home, i literally landed up getting screwed...
I was about to write on my mom's handbag, but my sanity saved me on time...Do all writers go in a trance when something comes up in their mind?
I hope not...

I wrote it on a plastic carry bag...*phew*
It does come handy sometimes...



I know it is not legible, so i'll decipher it for you

:: Features so sharp, blunt is the built...
Press it & tips tilt...
Ideas clack when it's put on paper...
Runs wild when ends taper..
~ A Pencil

4 comments:

jinksy said...

Missed this last week - sorry! I think it's very clever - well done.

Erratic Thoughts said...

@Jinksy Thank you so much for taking a look at this one too...I missed that bus :(
hmm...I was a late riser then :D

Rohan said...

I loved it...
Runs wild when ends taper
Smoothly done.

Erratic Thoughts said...

@Rohan Thank you so much for dropping by.This was my first ever rendezvous with the Poetry bus, but I missed it!Thank you...:)